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date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 13:53:29 +0100,    group: uk.net.web.authoring        back       
Critiques?   
Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit paranoid 
regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going live.

While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel 
free to comment;

http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/

-dE|_---
date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 13:53:29 +0100   author:   dE|_

Re: Critiques?   
dE|_ wrote:

> Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit paranoid
> regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going live.
>
> While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel
> free to comment;
>
> http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>
It's not bad but why the tables for layout?
--
Regards Chad. http://freewebdesignonline.org
date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 06:24:32 -0700 (PDT)   author:   Chaddy2222

Re: Critiques?   
"Chaddy2222" wrote

>> Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit 
>> paranoid
>> regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going 
>> live.
>>
>> While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel
>> free to comment;
>>
>> http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>>
> It's not bad but why the tables for layout?

I was wondering when that would be picked on;

I'm trying to talk this guy into CMS for this page so simple table setup 
will be easier to manage.

I spent weeks super styling the 10 product pages as they came in one-by-one, 
these are staying simple as they come in.

-dE|_---

p.s. The note about target audience I'm about to leave is nothing to do with 
you, I thought of it before I read.
date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 15:07:30 +0100   author:   dE|_

Re: Critiques? Quick note pre-view   
> http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/

Note that this site is not aimed at kids or middle-age/middle-class mothers. 
Kazbar's clients are mid-top level musicians, producers and sound engineers.

-dE|_---
date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 15:12:36 +0100   author:   dE|_

Re: Critiques?   
On Sat, 19 Jul 2008 13:53:29 +0100, "dE|_"
 wrote:

>Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit paranoid 
>regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going live.
>
>While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel 
>free to comment;
>
>http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/

From your website:

"We are a tight network of highly skilled professionals from a broad
range of IT/Multi-Media/Marketing trades specialising in the internet
market place. By pooling together our expertise we are able to tap
into over 90 years of experience and bring you a cutting edge solution
to any Web based project in a range of styles."

That really doesn't show in this site and the others in your
portfolio...


-- 
Jurgen Nijhuis
http://www.argosmedia.nl
date: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 13:16:21 +0200   author:   Jurgen Nijhuis

Re: Critiques?   
"Jurgen Nijhuis" critiqued:
>
>>Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit paranoid
>>regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going 
>>live.
>>
>>While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel
>>free to comment;
>>
>>http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>
> From your website:
>
> "We are a tight network of highly skilled professionals from a broad
> range of IT/Multi-Media/Marketing trades specialising in the internet
> market place. By pooling together our expertise we are able to tap
> into over 90 years of experience and bring you a cutting edge solution
> to any Web based project in a range of styles."
>
> That really doesn't show in this site and the others in your
> portfolio...

Most of the portfolio was done on my own, Website Foundry and the 'network' 
is quite recent and not been exercised yet. The simple fact is; if I can't 
do it, I know a man who can, and I don't meen Usenet. (Ben writes his own 
CMS)

Would you care to offer specific critique on the page or Kazbar site I 
posted? The client is happy as Larry. Studios and Support are old though.

-dE|_---
date: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 12:50:52 +0100   author:   dE|_

Re: Critiques?   
<uk.net.web.authoring>
<Jurgen Nijhuis>
<Sun, 20 Jul 2008 13:16:21 +0200>


> >http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
> 
> From your website:
> 
> "We are a tight network of highly skilled professionals from a broad
> range of IT/Multi-Media/Marketing trades specialising in the internet
> market place. By pooling together our expertise we are able to tap
> into over 90 years of experience and bring you a cutting edge solution
> to any Web based project in a range of styles."
> 
> That really doesn't show in this site and the others in your
> portfolio...
> 
> Jurgen Nijhuis
> http://www.argosmedia.nl
> 

www.jpgimage.co.uk/full.php?image=1211

You dont even specify a background colour and you just assume that 
everybody uses the default windows white .

If you need any more web authoring help - then just ask .


-- 
www.krustov.co.uk
date: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 12:54:27 +0100   author:   Krustov

Re: Critiques?   
On Sun, 20 Jul 2008 12:54:27 +0100, Krustov  wrote:

><uk.net.web.authoring>
><Jurgen Nijhuis>
><Sun, 20 Jul 2008 13:16:21 +0200>
>
>
>> >http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>> 
>> From your website:
>> 
>> "We are a tight network of highly skilled professionals from a broad
>> range of IT/Multi-Media/Marketing trades specialising in the internet
>> market place. By pooling together our expertise we are able to tap
>> into over 90 years of experience and bring you a cutting edge solution
>> to any Web based project in a range of styles."
>> 
>> That really doesn't show in this site and the others in your
>> portfolio...
>> 
>> Jurgen Nijhuis
>> http://www.argosmedia.nl
>> 
>
>www.jpgimage.co.uk/full.php?image=1211
>
>You dont even specify a background colour and you just assume that 
>everybody uses the default windows white .
>
>If you need any more web authoring help - then just ask .

While I wasn't the one asking for a site review, I thank you for
reporting the lacking body background color. It has been corrected.
Feel free to report any other things you think are errors.

-- 
Jurgen Nijhuis
http://www.argosmedia.nl
date: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 23:17:14 +0200   author:   Jurgen Nijhuis

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