Critiques?
Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit paranoid
regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going live.
While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel
free to comment;
http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
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date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 13:53:29 +0100
author: dE|_
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Re: Critiques?
dE|_ wrote:
> Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit paranoid
> regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going live.
>
> While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel
> free to comment;
>
> http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>
It's not bad but why the tables for layout?
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Regards Chad. http://freewebdesignonline.org
date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 06:24:32 -0700 (PDT)
author: Chaddy2222
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Re: Critiques?
"Chaddy2222" wrote
>> Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit
>> paranoid
>> regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going
>> live.
>>
>> While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel
>> free to comment;
>>
>> http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>>
> It's not bad but why the tables for layout?
I was wondering when that would be picked on;
I'm trying to talk this guy into CMS for this page so simple table setup
will be easier to manage.
I spent weeks super styling the 10 product pages as they came in one-by-one,
these are staying simple as they come in.
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p.s. The note about target audience I'm about to leave is nothing to do with
you, I thought of it before I read.
date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 15:07:30 +0100
author: dE|_
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Re: Critiques? Quick note pre-view
> http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
Note that this site is not aimed at kids or middle-age/middle-class mothers.
Kazbar's clients are mid-top level musicians, producers and sound engineers.
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date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 15:12:36 +0100
author: dE|_
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Re: Critiques?
On Sat, 19 Jul 2008 13:53:29 +0100, "dE|_"
wrote:
>Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit paranoid
>regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going live.
>
>While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel
>free to comment;
>
>http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
From your website:
"We are a tight network of highly skilled professionals from a broad
range of IT/Multi-Media/Marketing trades specialising in the internet
market place. By pooling together our expertise we are able to tap
into over 90 years of experience and bring you a cutting edge solution
to any Web based project in a range of styles."
That really doesn't show in this site and the others in your
portfolio...
--
Jurgen Nijhuis
http://www.argosmedia.nl
date: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 13:16:21 +0200
author: Jurgen Nijhuis
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Re: Critiques?
"Jurgen Nijhuis" critiqued:
>
>>Apparently some bloke from 'The Cure' (producer I think) is a bit paranoid
>>regarding anything about them online and wants to see it before going
>>live.
>>
>>While the demo is up for a few days and I come back with fresh eyes, feel
>>free to comment;
>>
>>http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>
> From your website:
>
> "We are a tight network of highly skilled professionals from a broad
> range of IT/Multi-Media/Marketing trades specialising in the internet
> market place. By pooling together our expertise we are able to tap
> into over 90 years of experience and bring you a cutting edge solution
> to any Web based project in a range of styles."
>
> That really doesn't show in this site and the others in your
> portfolio...
Most of the portfolio was done on my own, Website Foundry and the 'network'
is quite recent and not been exercised yet. The simple fact is; if I can't
do it, I know a man who can, and I don't meen Usenet. (Ben writes his own
CMS)
Would you care to offer specific critique on the page or Kazbar site I
posted? The client is happy as Larry. Studios and Support are old though.
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date: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 12:50:52 +0100
author: dE|_
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Re: Critiques?
<uk.net.web.authoring>
<Jurgen Nijhuis>
<Sun, 20 Jul 2008 13:16:21 +0200>
> >http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>
> From your website:
>
> "We are a tight network of highly skilled professionals from a broad
> range of IT/Multi-Media/Marketing trades specialising in the internet
> market place. By pooling together our expertise we are able to tap
> into over 90 years of experience and bring you a cutting edge solution
> to any Web based project in a range of styles."
>
> That really doesn't show in this site and the others in your
> portfolio...
>
> Jurgen Nijhuis
> http://www.argosmedia.nl
>
www.jpgimage.co.uk/full.php?image=1211
You dont even specify a background colour and you just assume that
everybody uses the default windows white .
If you need any more web authoring help - then just ask .
--
www.krustov.co.uk
date: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 12:54:27 +0100
author: Krustov
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Re: Critiques?
On Sun, 20 Jul 2008 12:54:27 +0100, Krustov wrote:
><uk.net.web.authoring>
><Jurgen Nijhuis>
><Sun, 20 Jul 2008 13:16:21 +0200>
>
>
>> >http://www.websitefoundry.co.uk/KazbarNewsDemo/
>>
>> From your website:
>>
>> "We are a tight network of highly skilled professionals from a broad
>> range of IT/Multi-Media/Marketing trades specialising in the internet
>> market place. By pooling together our expertise we are able to tap
>> into over 90 years of experience and bring you a cutting edge solution
>> to any Web based project in a range of styles."
>>
>> That really doesn't show in this site and the others in your
>> portfolio...
>>
>> Jurgen Nijhuis
>> http://www.argosmedia.nl
>>
>
>www.jpgimage.co.uk/full.php?image=1211
>
>You dont even specify a background colour and you just assume that
>everybody uses the default windows white .
>
>If you need any more web authoring help - then just ask .
While I wasn't the one asking for a site review, I thank you for
reporting the lacking body background color. It has been corrected.
Feel free to report any other things you think are errors.
--
Jurgen Nijhuis
http://www.argosmedia.nl
date: Sun, 20 Jul 2008 23:17:14 +0200
author: Jurgen Nijhuis
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