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date: Sat, 26 Apr 2008 08:13:40 -0700 (PDT),    group: uk.music.folk        back       
Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.

(About 20 years ago, I was passing through Checkpoint Charlie.)

Poem 17 of 230: THROUGH WHAT WAS

During Europe’s summer, ‘88,
    At a wall my bag was checked:
A brief smile at what gave it weight;
    Sun-cream lid back - mood unwrecked.
I walked past plain buildings and cars,
    And entered a small food-store.
Its goods were plain, also: no sweet bars;
    The essentials - not much more.
As I bought crispbread, with money changed,
    A row began, at counter,
Between two, it seemed, Germans estranged -
    Clothes, to me, the sole pointer.
I headed back through the wall that was,
    Then signed a reunion book.
Reflecting, I’m happy/sad because
    The Left-cause, too, has been shook.

(C) David Franks 2003

From http://www.walkaboutsverse.741.com

On Apr 19, 11:07 am, walkaboutsverse  wrote:
> THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.
>
> (They say most attempts at commedy are aimed at someone - here I aim
> squarely at myself.)
>
> Poem 14 of 230:  NIGHT OR DAY?
>
> In the far north of Sweden,
>     A "Land of the Midnight Sun,”
> A strange thing chanced upon me -
>     And I’ll tell you, just for fun.
>
> Got off a train late-morning
>     (Had to catch same one next day)
> And trudged far to the Youth Hostel -
>     Paying for a one-night stay.
>
> I spent the afternoon sightseeing,
>     Then, after a latish dinner,
> Returned to my own small bedroom -
>     The comfy bed proving a winner.
>
> For I soon dozed into dreamy sleep -
>     Waking what was just two hours hence;
> But my watch was an analogue,
>     And night or day I couldn’t sense!
>
> I quickly packed all my things
>     (My train an hour or thirteen on)
> And hurried out the bedroom -
>     The bright sky a sneaky con.
>
> I wandered down the track a bit -
>     The Hostel office empty -
> Before a smiling helpful local
>     Did kindly enlighten me.
>
> Fromhttp://www.walkaboutsverse.741.com
>
> On Apr 12, 11:04 am, walkaboutsverse  wrote:
>
>
>
> > THE WEEKLY WALKABOUTS, E.G.
>
> > Poem 23 of 230:  ABOVE EVEREST
>
> > When flying from Nepal to Thailand,
> >     I was given a "good-side" seat;
> > And, as I looked out the plane window,
> >     The view I saw was really neat.
>
> > For breaking through a thick sheet of cloud
> >     Were the high Himalayan peaks;
> > And, rising the highest of them all,
> >     Mount Everest - heaven bespeaks!
>
> > Fromhttp://www.walkaboutsverse.741.com
>
> > On Apr 5, 11:10 am, walkaboutsverse  wrote:
>
> > > THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.
>
> > > After you've finished here, you may like to hear this poem sung on
> > > myspace.
>
> > > Poem 162 of 230: TEES TO TYNE: FIRST IMPRESSIONS - SUMMER 2001
>
> > > Where traditions are not so rare;
> > > Sea, country and works scent the air;
> > > A multitude of monuments,
> > > Planted tubs and patterned pavements.
>
> > > The longish pedestrian malls;
> > > The remnants of defensive walls;
> > > "Broken-roofed buildings" are a gauge
> > > Of the respect for heritage.
>
> > > Wheat, rape and pines in the fields;
> > > Estuaries guarded by shields;
> > > Long sandy beaches and wide scenes;
> > > Romantic-ruin go-betweens.
>
> > > Rivers in parts licked by trees,
> > > Or fringed by boat clubs, wharfs, gantries,
> > > And crossed by practical delights -
> > > Varied spans, forming pleasing sights.
>
> > > Fine churches headed at Durham;
> > > Football kits ad infinitum;
> > > Kept castles - one for study;
> > > Masonry behind masonry.
>
> > > And, with moulding-works out that way,
> > > It's somewhere for a longer stay..?
>
> > > Fromhttp://www.walkaboutsverse.741.com
>
> > > On Mar 29, 11:11 pm, walkaboutsverse  wrote:
>
> > > > Enjoyed my Saturday at the Gathering, friends, but, for better or
> > > > worse, I shall not be writing you any more verses on it - I retired
> > > > from versification upon completion of my life's work
> > > > http:www.walkaboutsverse.741.comin2003. But, I shall, of course,
> > > > continue to gently promote it in comp's, singarounds, forums, etc...> > > > On Mar 29, 8:39 pm, Richard Robinson  wrote:
>
> > > > > Jim Lawton said:
>
> > > > > > On Sat, 29 Mar 2008 14:40:53 GMT, "Steve Mansfield" 
>
> > > > > >>Dominic, For the love of all that's approved by Richard Dawkins, please
> > > > > >>don't quote the bloody 'poetry' in your response - I accidentally read a
> > > > > >>couple of lines and am still recovering ...
>
> > > > > > "The pure Vogonity of the underlying metaphor ... "  or something like
> > > > > > that ...
>
> > > > > Ee, by 'eck you got as far as metaphor ? When I were a lad, we used to hide
> > > > > behind the sofa just on sight of t'title.
>
> > > > > And I have to say, practise doesn't appear to have made any more perfect
> > > > > since then.
>
> > > > > --
> > > > > Richard Robinson
> > > > > "The whole plan hinged upon the natural curiosity of potatoes" - S. Lem
>
> > > > > My email address is athttp://www.qualmograph.org.uk/contact.html-Hidequotedtext -
>
> > > > - Show quoted text -- Hide quoted text -
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date: Sat, 26 Apr 2008 08:13:40 -0700 (PDT)   author:   walkaboutsverse

Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
Jason Hill wrote:
> Why do we have to put up with this doggerel week after week?
> 
> 
>
> <Loads more doggerel snipped>

I didn't realise he/she was still posting that stuff - killfiles work 
really well....
date: Fri, 11 Jul 2008 13:05:33 -0400   author:   S Viemeister

Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
> Why do we have to put up with this doggerel week after week?

Because nobody's gone round to that dumb fuck's house and kicked
his head in yet.

==== j a c k  at  c a m p i n . m e . u k  ===  <http://www.campin.me.uk> ====
Jack Campin, 11 Third St, Newtongrange EH22 4PU, Scotland == mob 07800 739 557
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date: Fri, 11 Jul 2008 18:07:43 +0100   author:   Jack Campin - bogus address

Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
Jack Campin - bogus address wrote:

> 
> Because nobody's gone round to that dumb fuck's house and kicked
> his head in yet.
> 


Do we have his address?
date: Sat, 12 Jul 2008 00:32:00 +0100   author:   Alan Lowey

Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
"Jason Hill"  wrote in message 
news:c92BrBFqO3dIFwDl@burslem.demon.co.uk...
> Why do we have to put up with this doggerel week after week?

We only *do* have to go to the trouble of ignoring it if people repost it - 
thanks to the killfile I've been blissfully unaware of said waste of 
bandwidth for some time ...
date: Sat, 12 Jul 2008 12:09:16 +0100   author:   Steve Mansfield

Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
Steve Mansfield wrote:
> "Jason Hill"  wrote in message 
> news:c92BrBFqO3dIFwDl@burslem.demon.co.uk...
>> Why do we have to put up with this doggerel week after week?
> 
> We only *do* have to go to the trouble of ignoring it if people repost it - 
> thanks to the killfile I've been blissfully unaware of said waste of 
> bandwidth for some time ...
> 
>
Me too, but then again, that verse that Jason quoted was so wonderfully 
bad, I read it several times just for the sheer enjoyment of its 
awfulness. Perhaps we need someone to filter out the gems and post them 
again for us.


-- 
Marjorie
date: Sat, 12 Jul 2008 20:20:16 +0100   author:   Marjorie

Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
Jacey Bedford said:
> In message <0h0ek.162438$8H5.121510@newsfe10.ams2>, Steve Mansfield 
>>"Jason Hill"  wrote in message
>>> Why do we have to put up with this doggerel week after week?
>>
>>We only *do* have to go to the trouble of ignoring it if people repost it -
>>thanks to the killfile I've been blissfully unaware of said waste of
>>bandwidth for some time ...
>
> Agreed just killfile or ignore. For gawd's sake don't repost it while 
> asking if we have to put up with it or all those of us who _don't_ have 
> to put up with it have to put up with it... if you see what I mean.

An item for the FAQ, perhaps ?

Q. Why do we have to put up with this doggerel week after week?

A. Because this is a person who treats u.m.f as a write-only medium. He has
been posting this stuff for years and does not respond to any requests to
stop, so there is nothing to do except killfile it. Please note that any
followups merely serve to draw it to the attention of those who have already
done so, which they tend to find irritating.

Jack could probably do a more entertaining job.



-- 
Richard Robinson
"The whole plan hinged upon the natural curiosity of potatoes" - S. Lem

My email address is at http://www.qualmograph.org.uk/contact.html
date: 13 Jul 2008 00:46:47 GMT   author:   Richard Robinson

Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
>
> Agreed just killfile or ignore. For gawd's sake don't repost it while 
> asking if we have to put up with it or all those of us who _don't_ have to 
> put up with it have to put up with it... if you see what I mean.
>

Don't you mean

This is the sort of thing up with which we will not put?

-- 
Steve Mansfield
Manchester, England
http://www.lesession.co.uk
date: Sun, 13 Jul 2008 12:21:03 +0100   author:   Steve Mansfield

Re: THE WEEKLY WALKABOUT, E.G.   
Gill.Smith.999@googlemail.com wrote:
> On 11 Jul, 15:32, walkaboutsverse  wrote:
> 
>      <snip>
> 
> Honestly, this stuff is DIRE.
> 
> You don't have even the remotest idea of what poetry is all about.
> 
> Ever done English? having graduated in the hard (in every sense)
> sciences, I did it English literature at night school and it was truly
> a revelation.

Gill, he doesn't respond to criticism. He persists in his delusion that 
he's a misunderstood genius, and there's no point in trying to reason 
with him. Best ignore him.

-- 
Marjorie
date: Sat, 19 Jul 2008 13:39:22 +0100   author:   Marjorie

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