TM wrote:
> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tUk88pZtg_s
> 

Not bad at all, good concept and fitted well into the short lyric - but 
the declamation-style of singing was a bit sort of 'hard' - all a bit 
frantic, fast. I think it would have been better taken with a bit more 
phrasing to the words.

The Strawbs 'Hangman and the Papist' comes to mind as a song with same 
kind of metre and present-tense narrative, and this one done in more 
that mode would be impressive. There's no real shiver in this rendition 
although it is Trevor's own song and his own delivery.

David